Young Writers Society

Wow. This is so completely random and ridiculous (and freaky) it shouldn't make any sense at all, but somehow, it does. I guess it makes sense ia=n a comedic way. T'was really funny. I was basically laughing like a psychopath the entire time!

Snoink!!

Oh. My. Goodness.

What hilarious fun. I told Griffinkeeper that "Halloweentime with our Favorite Scintillating Vampire" was great, so he sent me the link to this. And now that I have been sucked into the wonderful writing vortex that is YWS (yay!!), I can officially say GREAT JOB. Sometimes things are funniest when they're said aloud and blatantly to the point. And randomness? Whew, don't get me started! It's too much fun. I don't know FREAK, so I can't say how the characters were manipulated, but I'm pretty sure you did them all comedic justice!

(Remember last quarter when you told me "Let's make fun of Twilight"???)

Quote:

"I'M A LIZARD!"
-Snoink

Gotta love it. You just gotta.

I must say I had an absolute blast reading this piece, one of the funniest I'd read in a while. The humor never seems forced or set up, though I must admit I didn't catch the final joke. Random Guy 2 was fabulous. You manage to lamoon the brilliant Spaghetti Westerns while at the same time showing a deep respect for these films.

I grew up watching the old spaghettis, this brings back memories, albeit wildly distorted ones, but memories nonetheless.

good work snoink. I see why you deserve the title of King Pig.

hahahhaaa
H I L A R I O U S
honestly! I loved the complete and utter random-ness of it. My fave character was random guy 2 because he just kept coming back to life and bugging everyone! I loved the line:

DANNY
Because it is a catchy line that sizzles of sexual tension and makes it clear that I am a prick, thus making my character have a flaw.

Great job snoink!
xxmimixx

HA HA HAHA A HAH AHA AHAH AH HZAH HA HAH AH AHA HAH AHA AH A HAHAH AHAHA THAT WAS SO FUNNY! Sorry i had a big laff attack. I LIKE ALL THE KILLING!I really enjoyed the ending. good good good good good good good good good good good good job, Snoink. I REALLY REALLY LIKED IT.

TREE

If I had yet to see an example of worthless words for points, then I just found it.
Great Play anyways. It's gone on under so much editing already, (that's what 3 pages worth of it does) so there isn't anything to say.

Gold star.

I LOVE THIS! Best script EVER! *Starts plotting to turn script into amature video to put on YouTube*

I love it! I love all your scripts, they're just awesome!

My favorite line in the entire thing:

RANDOM GUY 2
I’m still alive!

DANNY
Shut up!

Love it! Keep up the awesome work

-Irish

So now that I've actually *read* FREAK...

Too Funny!

DANNY

She can’t help that she sounds like a howler monkey.

CLAUDIO

Shoots DANNY and blows off his arm. That’s what you get for taking the law into your own hands.

DANNY

Owie! I’m unarmed!

Buh-dum crash. Also, "I'm still alive!" = best dialog line ever.

Man With No Name... such an interesting character. I wonder who he could possibly be...

LOL! Yeah... there are a ridiculous amount of spoilers in here, aren't there? XD

Um, I don't get it

lol the was great

hahaha!
This is actually IMENSE!
It was so weird it was hilarious! Seriously well done!
I would start critiquing, but I didn't notice anything negative... I was too, busy laughing. Anyway, knowing you, everything's probably perfect.

Once again... hahahahahaha!
I'm so looking out for more of your scripts from now on!

xoxo Skins

*gahhhh*
*takes deep breath*

That was hilarious. Kudos to you.

This was SERIOUSLY FUNNY!!! Normally when I think something like this is funny, I laugh on the inside. But when I read this I almost couldn't because I am on my bed with my laptop on me, and it kept moving 'cause I was laughing. SERIOUSLY FUNNY!!!

LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET