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Futility (part 2)



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Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:12 pm
fhwdf says...



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"What if, doctor, we need these knots and these tangles because they're the only things holding our souls down - and if we untied the knots and untangled the tangles and stretched them out ... would our souls just float away?"
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Sun Apr 04, 2010 9:51 pm
Apple says...



Yeah go me!

Erhm, back to the reviewing. I liked it though, I think you can neaten up the structure of it some how.

I don't how, there are, in my opinion, to many spaces but big whoop. Great job!
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