Lol Really funny, I especially like Ron's first set of lines. Very creative and funny
Some Boys: Treat girls like a sweatshirt. It looks nice and it makes you look good. But when the sweatshirt changes they toss it on the floor. Other Boys: Treat girls like a human. They treat her with the respect they should get and love you no matter what happens.
This was hilarious! I can't believe I've never come across it before! I love the way you've managed to show characterisation even through rap and kept the characters true to themselves. I would have liked to see a bit of action from Hermionie or Malfoy though. Maybe even Filch... now that'd have been weird! Please keep writing! The world needs humour like this!
“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.” — Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince
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