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Dreams Tell Lies (Cover)



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Wed Aug 24, 2011 1:55 am
confetti says...



Spoiler! :
These are my two entries for IcyFlame's contest. Reviews are very welcome!


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Wed Aug 24, 2011 8:23 am
Zee says...



Whoa! These are really great! I love the look of them both and could stare at them for ages!
Great work!
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Wed Aug 24, 2011 9:29 am
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These are really beautiful! You've done a great job on them and I especially like the focus in the second picture. I can't comment a lot on them but I've given a short review to each of the entries posted in the contest so yours is no different. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest :)
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Wed Aug 24, 2011 2:05 pm
Noelle says...



Hi there!

Wow...these are great! The bright colors and detailed picture really drew me in. I can't really tell which one's my favorite, I love both of them! The first one has the most detail out of the two. I like the color of the waves as they're rolling along. The white foam looks great, especially in black and white. The second one looks really cool, kind of like rain drops on a flower.

Overall these are great. Keep it up!
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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