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My Gryffindor signature



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Sat Sep 24, 2011 6:28 pm
GoofySmurf says...



Games
Review Day
YWS
Fire
Fans
Indiana
Narrative Poetry
Deals
Oranges
Rain

Gryffindor!
Ehh, who knows what to put here anymore.
  





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Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:04 pm
IcyFlame says...



I love this!
Although maybe try to change:
goofysmurf2 wrote:Games

goofysmurf2 wrote:Indiana

goofysmurf2 wrote:Deals
Oranges
Rain


As some of them seem like they're just there because of what they begin with...
TEAM GRYFFINDOR!!
  





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Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:07 pm
GoofySmurf says...



yeah i got the idea from mikko hers is ravenclaw
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Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:09 pm
GoofySmurf says...



and i for some reason i actually do like those things
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Sun Sep 25, 2011 2:34 am
fireheartedkaratepup says...



.........why is this a piece? I don't understand. I mean, I know you want feedback, but this is just your signature, right? Are you trying to do a style of poetry? But this is an acronym......


Honestly, I'm not sure why this is here. Shouldn't it be posted somewhere where you didn't have to pay points? Just because it's so short, and everything...

It just doesn't seem right to me. :|

But I love the signature! It's very creative. I should try to do that for puppies, or something--I'll have to mull it over for a long time before I decide. :P
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Mon Sep 26, 2011 12:05 am
Nightlyowl says...



I loved it, it was cute. Unfortunitally, when we did Wizzard week in 4th grade and we picked from the hat for our houses... I was put in Slitherinth... -insert evil laugh here- Maybe I should write one for my house... Hehe. Great job anyway!
~Nightlyowl
  








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