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Tue Jul 26, 2011 7:44 pm
XxMattxX says...



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Last edited by XxMattxX on Wed Jul 27, 2011 6:44 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Tue Jul 26, 2011 7:53 pm
Sassykat says...



The only thing I didn't like about it were the eyes. Very unique, very cool. I liked the water look of it!
Shakespearian tongue-twister:

To sit in solemn silence
In a dark, dank dock
In a pestilential prison
With a lifelong lock;
Awaiting the sensation
Of a short, sharp shock
Of a cheap, chippy chopper
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Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:54 pm
Starlight9 says...



I love the design of your novel cover. However, I have a few comments to mention:
1) I like your choice of the background. It is simple, and kinda fits the theme of the novel. I like the water drops as well, for it reminds me of the events going on in the first chapter, the heavy rain drops.
2) The hand shadows are also a great choice to place on the cover.
3) I like the font type you have used for the novel title as well as the author's name. I wonder if you have made the author's name more bold, it would be clearer and not hidden by the water drops.
4) I didn't like the eyes at all, they look crossed and don't carry much emotion related to the theme of the novel such as fear, lie, sadness. I like the eye color though, it is calm and beautiful. Maybe you can look for another eye shape having the same color.
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Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:16 pm
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Re-did the eyes after all. Updated feedback would be appreciated!

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