My God you found it funny? I never knew I could write anything that could be considered funny. Thank you for commenting and I think I'll get the rest done tomorrow.
Psh, of course it's humorous! With words like "Gooblegog," how could it not be? I agree that this was well done--very creative and vivid. Post more soon!
i thought you were shallow, but then i fell in deep.
This is really creative especially the Tube. I really liked it.
My favourite part was:
Lorin released the pressure on his boots and floated towards her; he grabbed her by the hair and floated down again; ignoring her cries. He untied the robe from her waist and shoulders, Alice sighed and nearly floated away again but Lorin caught her hand.
But I think it was meant to be rope not robe.
The centre of attention was plumb man known as Knave Droopa The centre of attention was a plumb man know as Knave Droop.
Droops pushed the button. Droop pushed the button.
In all the time we have
There is never enough time
To show what is in our heart.
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