As Ryder walked solumly along the road through the alley, bits of Avenged Sevenfold and Breaking Benjamin bounced through his head. His thoughts wandered along at the same pace that the had been walking for the past hour. After minutes of thinking of nothing in particular, he found he was coming onto a fence wall.
There was nothing special about this fence, except for the fact that he didn't feel like climbing it. If it were any other time other than that day, he would have climbed effortlessly over the fence and unto the other side.
Once he was upon the fence, he locked his fingers in the links. He turned around and leaned on the fence, he interfaced with the button on the sunglasses and switched them to the thermal setting. He scanned the horizon, no movement. He turned to face the fence once more, he scanned the horizon beyond; still no movement. He pondered wether he would do what he was thinking he would do, or simply turn back around and walk the opposite direction.
Aahh, what the hell... he thought to himself
Ryder drew his breath, he focused, and then he blinked. By the time he re-opened his eyes, he was standing two feet from where he had previously been standing. This time on the other side of the fence.
He continued walking...
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