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Chapter 2
The Meeting
As Rone woke up he couldn’t remember anything except he knew he had a pain in his ankle and a headache. He saw he was in the middle of charred area of grassland. Then he recalled what had happened. He looked around to see if the scroll was still there and saw it in the middle of the charred grassland
As he tried to get up, he felt a stabbing pain in his left shoulder and fell back down. He took his hand to search for anything there. He felt the knife and was about to take it out when he remembered what he read in a book about injuries. “When something has pierced your skin, do not pull it out until you have the proper medical attention.”
Rone dragged himself over to a tree and got himself to a
standing position. He walked over to the scroll and picked it up. After he put it in his pack he noticed something. He heard nothing. No screams. No sounds of fighting. No sounds of destruction.
He stood there a moment, pondering whether he should go back to town. After a while he remembered his sister’s tattered corpse. He felt extremely sad thinking of his sister. He wanted to cry but he couldn’t anymore. He decided if anyone had survived that devastation, he would try to save them. He decided to go back to Valeria to search for survivors and supplies.
As he was walking back, Rone heard some bushes being brushed up against. He reached into his bag and grabbed a scroll. He thought it was the flame scroll from before, but he didn’t realize he had grabbed a different one. He opened the scroll and was ready to throw it on the ground when a skinny girl with brown silky hair appeared from the bushes.
“Stand down. My name is Sisilia. We’re here to find out what happened to Valeria,” said Sisilia, in a calm peaceful tone.
“My name is Rone. How did you guys survive?” asked Rone
after seeing a buff teenager with black hair and black eyes come out of the brush.
“My name’s Wyvern and we weren’t in the city when it was attacked. The way you look, it seems like you were in a fight,” said Wyvern noticing Rone was limping when he walked and he was grabbing his shoulder.
“Yea, I was in the library when the attack started. The attackers called themselves the order of the Ankishi. Me and the librarian were able to get out of the city, but we were ambushed and the librarian was killed,” said Rone looking down with slumped shoulders.
“We heard a huge explosion. Do you know what it was?” asked Sisilia in an urgent tone.
“No, we were out of the city when the explosion went off, but I think it was there final strike on Valeria,” said Rone slowly still cringing with pain.
“What’s with the scr…?” asked Wyvern after a while trying to continue the conversation.
“Wasn’t the explosion a while ago? Why are you guys only investigating it now?” asked Rone a little confused not meaning to cut off Wyvern.
“We didn’t want to get there while the attack was happening and get killed,” said Sisilia a little defensive.
“I…” before Rone finished he grabbed Sisilia and Wyvern and
dropped the scroll hoping they would survive like the librarian’s body. The scroll, instead of setting off a fire bomb, created a cylindrical shield that stretched to the top of the tree line with different colors of lightning.
“Well this is different,” said Rone, a little surprised.
“How did you know it would do that?” asked Wyvern completely shocked.
“I didn’t. I was expecting a ball of flame,” said Rone, while
chuckling as he looked in his bag at the fireball scroll.
“HEY WHAT WAS THAT FOR?” yelled a voice out in the woods.
“Identify yourself,” ordered Sisilia.
“I’m Sendoma and that girl over there is Alexandria,” said Sendoma calmly coming out of the brush pointing to Alexandria on the opposite side.
A conversation started between Rone, Sisilia, Wyvern, Sendoma, and Alexandria that was pretty much the same as the conversation between Rone, Sisilia, and Wyvern. Finally, Rone said, “I think we should go back to Valeria and search for survivors and supplies.”
“I agree,” said Sisilia and Alexandria at the same time with Sendoma noticing the stare they gave each other.
“I don’t care just as long as I don’t die,” said Sendoma.
“No! There might be more of them waiting for survivors to return,” said Wyvern with a rush of intelligence.
“Ya know big foot has a point there,” said Sendoma joking about Wyvern’s buff body.
“That makes sense, but we still need to get supplies and rescue
any survivors so let’s come up with a plan,” said Rone already thinking of a plan.
After a while Sendoma said, “I got it. We come into the city at different times, but we make sure we can see each other. The thing is we need a base camp.”
“The library,” Rone said quickly.
“Wha…why?” asked Wyvern completely dumbfounded.
“Well the first thing it is in the center of the town. Secondly with all the tables in there we can create fortifications. And thirdly I need to use the books to translate these scrolls I have.”
“The library it is,” said Sisilia and Alexandria at the same time with Sendoma noticing the look they gave each other again.
“I’ll go in front to lead the way. Last is the most dangerous so you guys argue over it,” said Rone already beginning to sound like a leader.
“I’ll be last,” said Sendoma surprising everyone.
“Why?” asked Alexandria.
“Well the academy taught me magic that I have no talent in. None of you know how powerful my magic is and I think I am more powerful than most of you right now.”
“Okay I agree Big Mouth’s in the back,” said Wyvern right after Sendoma was finished.
“Okay it’s decided. See you in the library,” said Rone, a little concerned for Sendoma.
Rone walked slowly, turning around constantly scanning the area looking for traps. As Rone got deeper into the town, he started getting more relaxed and went faster. After a while Rone reached the library. It was exactly the way he had left it with the two Ankishi’s bodies greeting him as he walked in. He went in and started moving the tables to create a small fortress. As he was setting up the last table, Sisilia walked in.
“Need any help?” she asked surprised at how much Rone had done.
“Yea, can you start gathering translation books? Any language,” said Rone, admiring his fortress.
As Sisilia was searching the shelves for translation books, Rone was searching them for survival and guide books.
“Hello? Anyone here?” shouted a voice from the entrance.
“Wyvern, you’re so stupid. What if there were enemies in here. You would have just announced yourself to them,” shouted Sisilia extremely angry.
“Geez. Sorry.”
“Wyvern, help Sisilia with searching for translation books,” said Rone, not even fazed by Sisilia’s outbreak.
“Okay.”
After a while neither Sendoma nor Alexandria had entered the
library, so Rone was getting nervous.
“Whew. I thought that you guys were caught. You should at least have someone standing there to welcome the others or enemies,” said a voice right above Rone.
Rone looked up and saw Alexandria standing on the top of the
book shelf he was looking at. “What took you so long? I was starting to get worried,” said Rone as he let out a sigh of relief.
“I got side tracked a little bit.”
“How about you wait for Sendoma?”
“Okay. Oh and nice fairyland castle you’ve set up here.”
As Sendoma was walking through the city, he noticed something that he hadn’t yet. Valeria was still intact. He thought the explosion from before was large enough to destroy most of the city, but most of the buildings were still up.
After he was done looking at the buildings he noticed that he had stopped and was out of sight of Alexandria.
“Why’d I volunteer to be last? I don’t even know the way to the library,” whispered Sendoma to himself.
“How’d you survive?” said a commanding voice several feet behind Sendoma.
As Sendoma turned around, he saw a guy in black clothing with eyes on fire.
“Hello my name is Sendoma. What is your name?” said Sendoma sarcastically.
“My name is Makajeh and I am the leader of the Ankishi, the army that destroyed this town. So how did you survive?” responded Makajeh impatiently.
“I was out of the city when it was attacked. How’d you destroy this city?”
“I had infiltrators come in and destroy the gate. Then my army of four thousand came in and killed everyone. Also we blew up the palace before the council and guards could get out.”
“How did an army of four thousand destroy a city of twenty thousand elite magic users?”
“We found a way to make ourselves immune to magic. However, we did have about twenty casualties. Now, I need to kill
you.”
Immediately after Sendoma heard that, he got ready to defend himself. Makajeh drew his bastard sword and charged at Sendoma. Sendoma raised his hand in the air and waited for Makajeh to get closer to him. As soon as Makajeh was five feet away, Sendoma aimed his hand at the ground. A pillar of fire spiraled around Sendoma and hit the ground. When it hit the ground, it erupted into a curved beam like the end of a parenthesis. It then traveled on the ground quickly toward Makajeh. Makajeh, barely having time to respond, jumped out of the way and slashed at Sendoma. Sendoma ducked and thrust his fist into Makajeh’s gut. Makajeh was stunned by the attack. Sendoma saw the chance and took it. He kept punching Makajeh until Makajeh jumped backward and started dodging. Sendoma backed out of reach of Makajeh and his bastard sword
“You’re tougher than I thought. I will spare your life this once, but next time the battle won’t even be half as long,” said Makajeh panting a little.
“Wait, before you leave where’s the library?”
Makajeh, annoyed, said words that gave Sendoma chills and teleported away.
“I was serious. I have no idea where the library is,” yelled Sendoma.
“Who are you talking to?” said a female voice behind Sendoma.
“Oh, no one, just the leader of the enemy,” said Sendoma sarcastically after he noticed it was Alexandria.
“Really. Well everyone’s waiting so come on,” said Alexandria not really believing him.
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