Aww, man, cliffhanger... And I liked the way you made it seem so sudden and somewhat abstract, it leaves us skeptical to whether the man killed Amanda or not (I hope not!!). Overall, nice story, gonna check out the next chapter when it's up (It might already be up....I'll go look)
(Holy fish, so many reviews before this one were sooooo long!!! *feels out of place*)
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