I don't have a title yet, but this is the first chapter of the book i started this summer. It's still in progress. It's rated pg-13 because later on there is a battle and i want to keep the rating the same for all the chapters I post.
Chapter One
“Pérez es muerto! Pérez es muerto! Cambia es libre! Viva Cambia!” These constant cheers of rejoicing have been playing on the living room radio for hours. My father adjusts the knob to phase out some of the static that inhibits him from hearing more about the current situation. Eager to escape the confusion, I log on my computer to check my MySpace. My profile page cheerfully reads: Hello, Margo. I half laugh at that. The computer is the only cheerful one today. Hesitantly I glance at the bulletins. One read: “Have you seen him?” I instinctively glance at the date: July 7th, 2007. My mind tells me not to click on it, after all no news is good news, but my body disobeys and opens it anyway. “Please if you see this guy, IM me or call me right away. He has been missing ever since the uprising. I think he might be dead. If there is any information, please tell me ASAP” -Maria. Attached is a familiar picture of a Latino youth staring into nothingness, oblivious he is the photo’s subject. Suppressed tears rise up. Soon I am bawling into my mahogany desk. Why did this have to happen? Why a rebellion? We want them to have freedom, but not like this. There are better ways to solve issues; unfortunately violence was chosen due to its celerity and the impatience of the radicals.
It has been a little over a week since the chaos. Carlos Pérez, malevolent dictator of Cambia, has finally passed away after months of sickness. The plan was for his brother, Ramon Pérez, to take over permanently after ruling in his sick absence. The Nuevo Revolucionarios had other plans. The Nuevo Revolucionarios, or NR for short, started out as a group of Cambians who want to be free of dictatorship. Unfortunately they are slowly becoming that which they were trying to overcome. They stormed into the funeral of Ramon Pérez’s recently deceased wife, to catch him off guard physically and emotionally. They pinned his guards to the ground and snatched up Ramon. Ostensibly this caused a huge uproar and local police reacted immediately, not a well thought out part of the plan. So instead of kidnapping him for negotiations, they took him to the nearest room, hastily pointed a pistol to his slick jet-black hair and demanded he give Cambia back to the people. His response was as cool as a snake’s back, with the scorpion’s sting: “Never”. Within an instant he was dead, and the rebellion had begun.
My thoughts return to Maria’s bulletin. Maria and Julio have been dating for nearly a year. I find it odd that he would leave her, but at the same time nationalist’s blood flows through his veins. Julio disappeared shortly after the rebellion had broken into full swing. My only guess at his whereabouts is that he is in Cabino’s capital, Amer, joining his fellow young rebels, or on a cheap fishing boat to some similar destination. I sigh. He always was that type, the one who would pick up and leave when adventure called. The minute he found out about the NR he must have thrown what little clothes he owned into his tattered school bag, with bike chains and old combination locks attached, and caught the first boat out, 90 miles south, to the chaotic center of the uprising. The government has been attempting to keep citizens from storming to Cambia, but their minor efforts were not enough to stop several thousand rebels from taking over the docks for their revolutionary purposes. It stands to reason that the fishing industry is suffering due to this, but the fishermen don’t care. They were the first to sail out of the harbor, past the docked cruse ships, under the 7 mile bridge, and well past all signs of our territory.
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