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Sat Oct 29, 2011 7:50 pm
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Dhiren says...



Aella Dione, a young goddess, runs away from her father to live with the wolves. While on a hunt, she discovers that she is not alone in the woods that are her home. A truly heartwarming and passionate novel about how someone who doesnt believe in love comes to learn it's real.
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Sat Oct 29, 2011 8:06 pm
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AngelKnight900 says...



Lol, this could have been your summary when you were making your book's portfolio but it's okay. But if you wanted to do a summary, you should have gotten into more depth into it or are you thinking of new things as you go? I'm not too sure about your title thought because I don't think it could have a relation with your story but you're the author here. Good luck and keep writing and welcome to YWS.
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Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:54 am
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Calligraphy says...



Hi Dhiren, like AngelKnight I agree that this sounds a lot like a summary. If you are planning on making this into a fantasy novel though it sounds very interesting and I would love to hear more about it! Let me know if you post more of this on YWS; I'd be happy to review it. My only problem is that in the summary it sounds like Aella is going to live with the wolves and that sounds a lot like the novel: Julie of The Wolves by Jean Craighead George, but I'm sure you have a few tricks up your sleeve to make in an original plot. : )

See you around,

Calli
  








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