Elemental Cycle: Volume 1- Fireborn
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tooThe power of a Siren's Song wasn't what it was in the Age of Magic, but if everyone else was asleep he and Adri should be unconscious to.
was that something he said out loud? If yes, it's really weird to have him say that. If not, if it's a thought, it should be in italics.Kei swore under his breath. Of course the gate was open, they had left someone to guard just in case. "I was overconfident. I'm such a fool."
Again, her thoughts should be in italics.Yurara watched the puzzling young men too, but it was curiosity that stirred her, not fear. "Who are you two, to stay awake when a Siren compels you to sleep?" She thought. "Who are you? What are you?" In the predawn light there was no answer.
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