A wonderful continuation to a seemingly great story. Quite honestly, I don't have much to write about. It was well-written with those very few grammatical errors. I liked the beginning. The description you gave to the scenery. It gave me these cool pictures in my head that I love to see when I read something. When I can clearly see what you're trying to get across, that, to me, shows good signs of a great story. Must now wait patiently for next part. Keep writing, and may the Force be with you.
"Always believe in yourself. Do this, and no matter where you are, you will have nothing to fear." - Baron Humbert von Gikkingen JudyG <3
Uh, Lisa, the whole reason we have elected officials is so we don't have to think all the time. Just like that rainforest scare a few years back: our officials saw there was a problem and they fixed it, didn't they? — Homer Simpson
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