(Ok, here is the first chapter....what do you think?)
"Miss Emily Taylor is sentenced to seven years transportation to Australia for stealing the following items: one bible, two skeins of knitting wool, a bonnet, one loaf of bread and a pound of cheese.’
The judge looked sternly over his glasses and cleared his throat, nodding his head at the quaking g.irl sitting in the dock, her grimy handkerchief clutched in her shaking hands. She didn’t lift her head when the sentence was read, but her shoulders drooped pathetically. Someone in the audience muttered something about "Society running to dirt, but it’s their own fault". The judge banged the gavel for order and said “Okay, next case”.
A soldier gently led Emily out of the dock and took her to her cell. When they got there, he opened the door and let her in. She sat on the only stool in the room, and put her head in her hands. The young soldier cleared his throat uneasily.
“Well, miss, I’m sorry to hear your sentence...if there was anything I could do...” He stopped, and gazed at his boots uncomfortably.
Emily glanced up, her face sorrowful in a frame of tangled curls.
“I was only taking those things to give to my ailing mother and father, but of course, the jury never understands compassion.” she said, vehemently, sobs starting to shake her thin body.
“I’ll look after them. Your parents, I mean.” The soldier promised, his voice breaking, as his heart felt for this young woman with no hopeful future before her.
“Sir...how can I ever thank you” Emily gazed up, and she smiled sweetly, a glimmer of hope in her face. The soldier smiled back.
“My name is Thomas. Thomas Witting, at your service.” He told her, and then he bowed slightly, and went out, locking the door behind him. The sound of that closing door was the last straw for already strained nerves.
Emily collapsed on the hard, board bed, the despair and fear of the last couple of days taking over. Thomas felt his throat constrict as he paused outside the cell, hearing Emily’s grief. He strode down the long, dismal corridor, his boots ringing on the dirty floor.
Oh, I’d give anything to be going to Australia with her...the least I can do is look after her parents. They’ll probably be eternally grateful. Dam! It is all their fault that she’s here, and on her way to some distant land...he thought angrily, punching his fist into his other hand in frustration.
A fellow soldier glanced up as he went past
“Something bitten you? Or maybe you’ve had too much brandy lately” the burly man laughed and punched his arm teasingly. Thomas shook him off and stomped into the sleeping quarters that he shared with ten other enlisted men.
The iron beds were is orderly rows down the long gloomy room. Their mattresses squeaked under his weight when he sat down, putting his head in his hands. A moment later an officer came in, demanding in a rather colourful language why he wasn’t on parade. Thomas got up quickly and stood at attention
“No, not in here, get out there with the others, you lazy so and so!” roared the officer, getting red in the face from his blustering.
“Yes sir, right away” Thomas agreed and quickly ran out to the ranks of waiting men. A few chuckled as he appeared; others just glanced sideways, before the sweating officer commanded their attention.
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