Based on the feedback that I have recieved so far I have decided to edit it a little. Thanks Shauni and MeadowLark!
In the distant future, everyone has the choice to enhance their bodies to be able to do extraordinary things. A person can have their choice of one of the five categories of body enhancement: agility, mind, strength, flexibility, and stealth. Legally, when a person reaches eighteen years of age, he or she can have the procedure that changes his or her body. People who cannot afford the operation may have had it done illegally. Almost fifty four percent of mankind has had the procedure. Since half of the world has had their body advanced in some way, mankind has gone into an “extremist” era, testing out their new body enhancement, some entering contests, challenging others, forming alliances, or preforming daredevil stunts. All of them risking their life for the thrill. This thrill that risking one's life creates has drawn many to take the procedure.
Not everyone has chosen to change their bodies though. The other half of mankind has chosen to live life as their known ancestors had lived. They believe that, in time, the procedure will break down the human body, leaving those who haven't “contaminated” themselves to inhabit the Earth. From that point on, they believe that the Earth will become a paradise for the remaining few. Because of the conflicting differences between the two halves mankind, a war has been forged. The half of mankind with enhanced abilities has the upper advantage, and they are winning.
One person has decided to live differently than all the rest, though. He is enhancing his abilities in all areas that the procedure offers, without taking the procedure. He has set himself apart from the world, living in tune with nature, rather than defying it or forcing it upon himself. His existence is unknown to the world, but not for long.
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This is just my prologue. I spent three days figuring this out to set up a nice plot, so critiques are VERY welcome, and I would like to hear what you think about the general idea of it. It will be a very exciting (hopefully) story. Just hang with this for now, you know, for some background information?
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