I read it all! And really enjoyed it. A secret between you and me, I've heard so much about this around the site (on your blog particularly) and have been itching to get a good look at some of it! So you've made me quite happy!
Anyways, on the topic of chapter one. I liked it, but did feel it was underdeveloped. I would kind of like to know more about where the freak lives. It seems like a horrific sort of place and readers always sort of like reading more about those sort of things in a sick sort of way. It sort of connects the reader to whoever is going through this horrific life, and could give a bit more starting insight into the freak. But that's just an idea.
Looking forward to seeing more of this! And to someday seeing it all in print!
Keep working on this!
-Lauren-
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