Snoink wrote:Would you like having a firm picture of what the freak looks like for the beginning, and, if so, what sorts of descriptions of the body are you looking for?
I was a little frustrated at times not knowing what she looks like, but I don't know if it's necessary right now. As is, we are horrified enough at the situation. Maybe let things get a little further before really talking about how she looks? Make the impact all the greater? Sort of like hiding the villain in shadow until the great reveal?
It would be nice to get some description somewhere along the line though.
~GryphonFledgling
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