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I, personally, think that attaching a number to the simile detracts from its effectiveness. I paused over that sentenced when I read it, interupting the flow you had going. That's just my personal opinion, you don't need to take it as biblical truth.The guilt weighs upon my heart like forty million bricks
The guilt weighs upon my heart like forty million bricks.
Every day the protestors outside dwindle in number. I wonder if they ever sleep or eat.
Surely those fighting for freedom do not leave the bodies of the deceased on the streets to be tread upon by steel-toed boots.
Theirelbows poke out frombehindbaggy clothing and their eyes have shrunk back intotheirhollow sockets.
We found a secret cellar with so much canned food.
The wavering men and women outside appear to be in the last stages of some fatal disease; and they are. For that illness is delusion; living in a fantasy land and not accepting reality for what it is – tragic.
she looked at me with her lips pouting and surrounded by frown lines.
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