This is the story I told you about; the one that I just randomly kept adding to it as I went along... I wrote over 4,000 words in less the 3 hours.
The Beginning:
Noisy footsteps trampled through the metal corridors. Small red dots floated along the walls and piping, casting a haunted glow.
“Come on men! We’ve got to get ’er out this time!” a strong well-built solider yelled into his mask‘s microphone.
The small militia of four continued through the cold, long forgotten hallways.
“What level are we on sir?” a fellow soldier in the back called.
“N-five, three more to go, Foxtrot,” the front-man responded.
The group continued their course. After what seemed like several hours of aimlessly searching, they came upon level ‘N-8’.
“This is it kids; according to the plans, she should be in…” He paused as his flashlight shone upon several doors. “This one!” He jerked the handle open. Several alarms began to go off , red lights flashed around, casting eerie shadows of old computers.
“Get that thing shut off!” the lead-man screamed. One of the soldiers smashed the butt of his assault rifle against the keypad. Several strikes finally silenced the screeching alarms. Another soldier flicked a light on, to all of their surprise, the ancient fluorescent lights came to life. Revealing computers and wires, all of them connecting to a water-filled tank.
“Oh my God,” the soldier who had turned the lights on dropped his flashlight in amazement.
There, inside the tank was the non-responsive body of a young woman. At first appearance the soldiers thought she was nude, but she had a light skin-tight bodysuit, and a mask around her face, with a tube down her throat extending to a machine; to allow her to be fed without taking her out of the tank. Her body floated insensibly in the water. Her ghostly white eyes stared into nowhere, blinking automatically every few minutes.
“Well! Quit gawking and get her out!” the lead soldier commanded. All of them went straight to the computers.
“Sir, they’ve been able to maintain an even ninety-eight point six degrees! All of this time, all of these years she’s been floating in there senseless!” the soldier called Foxtrot said in amazement. Soft beads of sweat began to form on his forehead.
“Hurry up and get her out of there. The crown needs her! We all need her!”
“Yes sir, general, sir,” Foxtrot answered.
“General, none of these computers are programmed to release. Look, boys for the drainage button!” one of the soldiers shouted.
All five of them began throwing papers around, moving the research tools all around. After several minutes went by, one of the soldiers shouted,
“HERE!”
He slammed the large red button, and several lights began to flash. Slowly but surely the tank began to drain. The girl’s body shook with the contact of fresh air. She coughed and aimlessly flopped around the small floor of the tank.
“Get her out! She’ll go into shock!” the general yelled.
Carefully, Foxtrot hoisted himself over the plexiglas wall,
“Easy now,” he put his arm over her. She snapped and swung at him, fists connected with his full body armor. Foxtrot wanted to laugh, but felt pity for her at the same time. For the first time in almost three-hundred years the poor soul was freed.
“She can’t hear you! Shoot her with the injection I gave you, that should be enough to know her out!” the general barked.
Foxtrot managed to also, throw a punch at the girl.
“I’ll ask for forgiveness later,” he said as her body went limp. He quickly searched for the inoculation and pulled it out of a pocket. He quickly shoved the needle through her bodysuit and injected into her veins. He lifted her weightless body up over the side of the glass, a fellow soldier scooped her into his arms. After Foxtrot managed to get out of the tank, the five of them, along with the girl, ran through the corridors. By now, dozens of alarms began to go off. Their screeching and red lights, almost drove Foxtrot to madness.
“Forty minutes to destruction,” an electronic voice boomed.
They spent almost an hour tromping through the cold base. When they finally reached the first floor, all of the exit doors were barred. They ran all around the rooms searching for an outlet.
“Delta? DELTA! We’re trapped! Get an exit door open now!” the general screamed into his radio.
“Eight minutes to destruction,” the electronic voice sent chills through the general’s spine.
“This is Delta niner-niner Beta, we will be blasting the south-exit doors, please stand-by.” a voice from his headphones responded.
“Get back!” the general yelled. All of them ran into a corner and huddled down.
A large boom came from the south gate, sending debris flying through the air. Instantly they ran from their corner shuffling through the mayhem and into the outside world. Foxtrot breathed a deep sigh of relief for a slight second as they made it to the military helicopter.
“Does she need a medic?” the soldier inside asked.
“What do you think?!” Foxtrot cursed.
“You, attend to the girl. Delta, get us back to base now!”
As the helicopter began to lift off, a loud explosion came from the research laboratory. The large complex was abruptly engulfed in flames. A burst of air thrust the chopper forward, knocking Foxtrot unto the front of the cockpit.
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