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MidnightWriter wrote:This is something I've had in mind for awhile, but I haven't got a chance to write it. I hope you enjoy it & please be kind.
Chapter One
It is the year 2271. Reader, you may think this time period looks completely different from yours, but I assure you, nothing has changed. No flying cars or teleportation, those are stereotypes of man No space herekind's dreams. The landscape of the world you used to call home,No comma needed is still the same. Nothing has changed. Would you like to hear the story of the kids who went through it all? We're going back to 2010.
It was a normal day, just like any other. Until the storm, that is. My friends and I, no commawere different. We knew things that others didn't and it had always been that way. I guess we were different for other reasons as well, but those should go unnamed.
We didn't different, or at least that's what I think. the word "weren't" should go there.I have slighty, no comma curly brown hair, forest green eyes, and freckles. My friends looked some no spacewhat like me, which was quite odd. Looks to us didn't matter, they didn't need too. We just needed to have our questions asked. School was extremely boring that day, until we got a suprise.
We were sitting in class when we all heard a loud crash. Not everyone, just my friends and I. It was thundering and lightening, Do you see how this sounds a bit weird? Maybe you could say "It was thundering with the occasional flash of lightning" or something. so we thought it was nothing more than a storm. Until,no comma a large creature walked in. No one could see it, but when it spoke the class knew we weren't alone.
"Alexandra Bright, Savanna Fowler, Bryan White, and Zac Lyons." The voice called.
"What do you want from t-t-them?" My teacher stammered.
"They must come with us."
"Okay, come on." I said to Savanna, Bryan, and Zac. Could you give us a description of how your character is feeling, or what she is thinking here?
I could tell is not needed they hesitated, but they got up and followed me to the creature. He was tall & just put "and" here dressed in black. I couldn't tell if he was human or not, but that didn't matter. He took us outside and showed us where to go. By the look in his forest green eyes, I knew something was wrong.
"What's your name?" Bryan asked.
"Zorand," He replied. "Please, don't be afraid of me."
"We won't, we just need an explanation."
Zorand paused and then stared at me. At that moment, I was sure I knew the answer. I ran my fingers through my brown hair and sighed. I had to tell them. I really didn't want to but the pleading look in Zorand's eyes forced me too. to
"I guess we're the chosen ones. We all said ourselves we could see things." I paused. "It makes sense. If you see the look in Zorand's eyes, something is wrong."
"Alexandra, that's correct. I cannot explain more here." Zorand whispered "Get in."
My friends were terrified, but I was ready for adventure and danger. Almost at the blink of an eye, we arrived at our destination. We got out and looked around. It had to be way past 2010 and I was right. Life seemed to be easy here, but everyone had a sad and scared expression. It was morning here, the scenery was beautiful. Zorand wouldn't have brought us here if everything was fine.
"So, what's wrong?" I asked.
"Wars. We are slaves, here." Zorand said "We need you guys to stop this period from happening so when I return home, humans and creatures will live in peace. No one will rule."
"Okay, but we're only teens. How can we stop a whole thing from happening.question mark here Not even the advanced adults could stop this war."
"You shall see." Zorand said.
We weren't sure what this meant or why. Following Zorand's rules and conditions were all we could do. He wrote them down on a piece of ripped, yellow paper.
Once we begin, no going back.
No telling anyone what happens.
When you go back, you can't share the secrets of time periods to come.
DO NOT TELL ANYONE YOUR IDENTITY.
I agreed to all four, understanding only three. Why would it matter if people knew our names? I thought. This seemed to be the most important, so I did not question Zorand. I wasn't sure if I should trust him or if this was even real. Was I dreaming? No, I was to real. Where would I come up with all this? I'm not crazy--- or am I?
Until the storm, that is.
"Okay, come on." I said to Savanna, Bryan, and Zac.
couldn't tell if he was human or not, but that didn't matter.
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