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sunxkissedxme wrote:"Well duh, that's the point smart oneperiod"
sunxkissedxme wrote:"Only in your dreamsperiod" I laughcomma standing up and tossing my remote onto the couch.
the 's' in 'she' doesn't need to be capitilized.sunxkissedxme wrote:"Dr. Fizz?" She asks
sunxkissedxme wrote:before it hit s the ground and explodes.
The period before the quotations should actually be a comma.sunxkissedxme wrote:"I don't know. Zoe, Ashley, and Morgan are taking me somewhere as an early birthday surprise thing." I explain running a brush through my slightly curly red hair.
sunxkissedxme wrote:"That's themcomma" I say grabbing my purse and cell phone. I yell a quick goodbye to my parents then turn to Violette.
"Hey Vi?" I ask.
"Yeah?" she says, not even looking at me.
"Rematch, tomorrow." I say. She turns and I wink then run out the door. I glance back as we drive away and see Violette at my bedroom window, staring back with a blank expression. I snap my head away quickly forcing the chill creeping up my spine back down.
"So where are you taking me?" I ask comma leaning my arms on the back of the drivers seat.
"Sapphire Blue" doesn't need to be capitilized.sunxkissedxme wrote:her Sapphire Blue eyes sparkling in the rear-view mirror.
Again, the period needs to be a coma before the quotations.sunxkissedxme wrote:"Fine, fine." I mumble kicking off my converse and pulling on my "new" shoes.
We both jump when a corn horn sounds abruptly from outside
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