Young Writers Society

[i wrote this for my friend to sing]

She walked away
Out of my house
Out of my mind
Out of my heart
She is running from me
From the pain
From the conflict
From the love
She was my everything
My passion
My soul
My friend
She is the one who puts me through this torture
Torture which will never end

And she’s gone
She’s moved on
Beyond the clouds
Past the stars
She has left
But I won’t forget
The imprint she left in my heart
She lives on in me

People say I’m sad
Say I’m messed up
Say I’m crazy
Say I’m down
I am worse
I am lost
I am sick
I am alone
I loved everything about her
Loved her hair
Loved her heart
Loved her eyes
She didn’t make it, but I will keep her alive
She is the part of me which will never die

And she’s gone
She’s moved on
Beyond the clouds
Past the stars
She has left
But I won’t forget
The imprint she left in my heart
She lives on in me

She
She was the one who looked out for me
She was the one who let me grow
She was there for me
And I loved her
More than she will ever know

And she’s gone
She’s moved on
Beyond the clouds
Past the stars
She has left
But I won’t forget
The imprint she left in my heart
She lives on in me

She is alive in my heart
She is living on in my spirit
She is and always will be
With me

Liked this. The use of repetition constantly in three lines kept a good structure to the whole piece.

The verse that starts "She" reminds me of the song of the same name by Green Day. Just a comment.

Overall though, great. I wanna hear you friend sing it now...

lol we're working on it- he likes it htough, so we're halfway there. by any chance is the greenday song a cover? 'cuz there's a song called "She" by elvis costello. just wondering. thanks a lot- i'm honoured cool avatar, by the way.

Ooooh~ I would like to hear this one day. Sounds cool