Young Writers Society

Boy, fucking ignore the ceiling fan and its ropey friend
For all they want to do is hang around and use up your time
If that razor wishes to dance side to side on your arm
You should then throw that fucker in the trash bin where it belongs
Right beside the “look at me” black clothes and the black eyeliners
Erase “myself”
And “hate”
And “I”
And put “I”
Then “am”
And “shit”
Emphasize you’re emo too
Paraphrase your emo shit

Whoa, oh, oh, oh
Da de dada
STUPID!
Whoa, oh, oh, oh
La de dada
STUPID!

(Look at me, look at me)
(Look at me, look at me)

Boy, embrace not the squeezing vessel that you’ve climbed into
Because it sends out the alarm for red targets to lock on
When the zombies sit at the far end of population
Feel free to cauterize their great invisible moaning wounds
Right beside the “look at me” black clothes and the black eyeliners
Please, burn “me”
And “at”
Then “Look”
Rephrase “I”
Then “am”
And “shit”
Implicate you’re emo too
Publicize more emo shit

Whoa, oh, oh, oh
Da de dada
STUPID!
Whoa, oh, oh, oh
La de dada
STUPID!

Whoa, oh, oh, oh
Da de dada
STUPID FUCK!

(Look at me, look at me)
(Look at me, look at me)

Whoa, oh, oh, oh
La de dada
STUPID FUCK!

(Look at me, look at me)
(Look at me, look at me)

STUPID!
FUCK YOU!
STUPID!
FUCK YOU!

(LOOK AT ME!)

“Johnny Cash is NOT emo!”

Funny. Random.

But seriously, this was so random. What are you talking about?

NO offense but the meaning I think is worthless. Talkling about emo stuff? But it was very random, cussed a lot, was very odd. Definatly unique, but also kind of weird, That sounded really ramdom. Also I see why it is rated 18, but this would apply to many 13 year-olds and up. Also I think it emos woud like it but it was jsut too random for me, I'm not an emo/punk/goth kind of person but I guess some people woud like it. But I am more of a nerd, type. Keep writing(maybe) :p lol you could write good if you didn't put all that trash in yoru writing.

Hm... Well, first of all, I don't agree with your other reviewers. They obviously can't understand what is not shoved into their faces. I liked how you put being emo into such a perspective. Maybe they/we _are_ bringing these things down upon ourselves. The last line -"Johnny Cash is not gay!" -did make me laugh (and I apologize if that offends you) but only because it was just thrown in at the end of the song. Dunno why, but it reminds me of the end of 'That 70's Show' theme song ("Hello, Wisconsin!"). Anyway, I'm getting off track (I ramble... sue me), the point of this is... I liked the song -I like all your songs -and I think I understood it well. Great stuff; keep it up.

He didn't write "Johnny Cash is gay"
He wrote "Johnny Cash is not emo"
Just thought I'd point that out.

I thought this song was really funny. Sometimes emo kids bug me too...especially the ones to whom I know are just doing it for attention, and majority of them do it for attention. My favorite part was the part where he was talking about them squeezing into their vessles or something like that which I interperet as them wearing those tight ass pants that look totally gay (if a guy wears them). It doesn't make them look cool at all, which is why he also put the "red target" in it to indicate that bullies will automatically be drawned to them.

Good work.