I feel really greedy wanting more reviews of my story, but every single review ends up in a major transformation. I'm not kidding. If you do choose to review the prologue of Reprisal, and scroll down to the first comment, you'll *see* the difference. And the difference is huge.
Don't review it if you don't want to It's a tad lengthy. Thank you in advance
Heya, you guys! I'm on holiday for a little while, so I probably won't get to your reviews untill Monday or Tuesday. In the meantime, everyone can still request, but you'll just have to wait a few days for your review. I don't mind if they pile up, it'll give me something to do when I get back.
Seemingly, I only have a few minutes, so I have to do Skins's review before your because of length. I promise, yours will be the first one I review after that.
It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language — Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey
would you mind reviewing the next chapter of my story?
It's a tad lengthy. Thank you in advance 
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