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Goodbye, Mum



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Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:08 pm
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Last edited by Littlewing on Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:54 pm, edited 2 times in total.
  





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Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:33 pm
WinterBloom says...



This is deep! And if I can make a guess I would think this story has great meaning to you?
I felt conected and you did a good job. A few of the things made menthinj what? O.o but once I reread I understood great job!


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Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:51 pm
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On reflection, I'm thinking it's a bit overwritten and flowery... Oh well. Thank you for replying!
  





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Sun Nov 20, 2011 2:27 am
SirTobes says...



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There is no such thing as a stranger. Only friends we haven't met yet.

Previously Just Toby

  








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