Jojo wrote:Why don't u tell the kid to join YWS!!!
He was a bit too young to join, and besides, I don't know him anymore. But I do try to get anyone I know who is at least 11 to join the site. Unfortunately, they usually just join and never post.
this is his first story? thats pretty good for a first, hmmm... well, its too short, and it lacks descripive or figurative language, what he's got it an outline for an awesome idea. KND is an awesome show. tell him to keep it up.
Don't take life too seriously, no one gets out alive
Aww! I found this story imaginative and incredibly adorable. I especially loved the KND reference, and I noticed that the KND do tend to blow things up when they can't decide how to solve something (not the best lesson in the world mind you). Encourage Will to continue writing and to keep his imagination fresh.
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