This short story is meant to be from the point of view of a young girl, around six years old, although the vocabulary isn't as juvenile.
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I awoke to the strong smell of charring wood and melting plastic. Glancing through half-closed eyes at the white wooden door of my bedroom I untangled my legs from the mess of blankets I’d kicked away during the night.
What was going on?
Did daddy burn breakfast?
I stretched my limbs, stiff from hours of sleep, and then went on to yawn. Finally I rubbed my eyes in an attempt to clear my vision. As my vision adjusted to the semi-darkness, I sat up with a start.
Light shone through the centimeter-wide crack between the wooden flooring and the door, flickering alternating yellow and orange.
Oh, god.
I was out of my bed in seconds, dashing to the door. Without another thought I closed my hand around the iron doorknob.
Screaming in pain I fell away from the glowing hot metal, cradling my burned hand as I clenched my teeth together tightly, then I opened my mouth to shout ‘DADDY! DADDY!’
No reply came, and I silenced.
The stinging waves of pain temporarily held me in a chokehold, and I remained where I was, sitting on the floor, the strong burning smell aggravating my nose. I sneezed, getting on hand and knees. The smell was edging on unbearable, especially now that the odor of smoldering flesh lingered in the air.
I stared down at my palm and felt my heartbeat spike. Blisters covered my hand, the surrounding skin a deep, mean red that came close to crimson.
Oh my god.
Smoke spiraled from beneath the door, and I lifted my eyes to follow the grey particles through the air. How did this happen? Where was daddy?
I scrambled towards the window, then lifted myself off my knees and clumsily yanked at the window handle with my uninjured left hand. The handle didn’t budge, and I cursed desperately, not giving up.
Why had I never decided to use the window? We’d lived here for over a year already! If only I’d asked daddy to open it for me once!
Panic rose as the smoke thickened, and I banged my fist against the window ‘HELP ME! I CAN’T GET OUT! DADDY! THERE’S A FIRE! DADDY HELP ME!’
On the verge of tears I yelled ‘PLEASE!’
The door of my room was kicked open, and I spun around. My dad was breathing heavily, his face and pajamas covered in soot ‘Amy! Come here baby!’
‘How-?’ I stammered, but he only shook his head ‘Come on!’
I stared into the wall of flames outside the door, that began to edge closer and closer to my room’s light blue carpet. Daddy kneeled before me, then, lifting me up he noticed my face twist and grabbed my hand carefully, turning it over ‘Oh my god… Amy…’
‘The door was hot daddy!’ he lifted me up again, and I buried my face in his neck, feeling slightly safer already.
Daddy would get me out of here, I knew it for sure.
‘Amy, hold on tight, okay?’
‘Yes, daddy’ I whispered, hiding in his arms, and felt him get to his feet. My legs bungled down, my feet warned by the heat from under the door.
‘Daddy I don’t want to go through the fire!’ I sobbed, my hand hurting madly. What if the fire touched me?
‘We’re not! Amy, hold on tight, okay?’
He already said that! Why did daddy sound so unsure? My daddy could do anything, he was like superman, only even stronger and better, so why did he sound so worried?
He walked to the window, I realized, when I peeked over his shoulder and saw the door grow more distant. I turned slightly, and watched him close his hand around the window handle and yank it open in one go.
He pushed it open, and a second later I saw the grass several meters under us.
Daddy faced the door again, and I widened my eyes, watching the flames soar up my bookshelf. My books!
‘Amy, close your eyes’
I glanced up at my daddy’s stubble beard, bewildered, then pressed my face against his shirt, not looking.
Unexpectedly I felt that we were falling, wind ripping at my hair.
Then, with a loud thump, we were no longer falling. I was in daddy’s arms, but he wasn’t standing anymore. He was lying on the floor, his eyes closed, and his mouth slightly open.
A red line of blood trickled from the corner of his mouth.
I rolled off him and patted his shoulder ‘Daddy? Daddy wake up!’
Screams made my ears ring, and I was pulled away from daddy by many hands.
I recognized my neighbor, Mary, and frowned at her. She held my face in her hands ‘Oh my god, Amy, are you okay?’
‘My hand hurts’ I pouted, then looked in the direction of daddy, but couldn’t see him. A whole group of people stood around there, blocking my view.
Mary brought her phone to her ear and started talking unbelievably fast. I didn’t bother listening, a bit like when I had grammar in school, and the teacher talked for too long about the same thing. I coughed, my throat feeling raw, and glanced at my hand again, tears springing into my eyes.
A horrible tearing sound erupted through the night air, and I looked up abruptly, watching the roof of my house collapse into an inferno of destruction.
Neighbors screamed as soot rained down on us, and Mary hauled me to my feet, walking me to the edge of the road. Sirens approached, and before long a fire truck sped into the street, screeching to a halt before my house. Firemen jumped out and began to run around, making all the neighbors move away from the hot flames that raged out of the hole that once was our roof.
More trucks parked haphazardly on the grass, and an ambulance came to a halt only meters from me. I stared in awe at the paramedics as they kneeled beside my father, then zipped open a pack and began to insert a plastic tube in his throat.
A kind face appeared before mine, and I looked the firefighter up and down. He smiled at me consolingly ‘Is that your house, kiddo?’
I nodded, trying to see past him, wishing he’d move so I could see daddy.
‘I’m Mick, what’s your name?’ he questioned, and I glanced down at my burned hand, then whispered ‘Amy’
‘Well, Amy, are you alright? Does it hurt anywhere?’
I nodded, again, then held up my hand. He pulled a funny face, and I grinned, forgetting the pain.
‘Come along, then, we’ll fix that hand of yours’ he walked me to the second ambulance, where a woman in a paramedic uniform patted me on the back kindly.
The other firefighters ran around in a frenzy, pouring water on what once had been my house. I looked around, failing to find daddy.
‘DADDY!’ I wailed, to the apparent shock of the firefighter and paramedic, and began to sob. Why wasn’t daddy with me?
‘I WANT DADDY ! DAD-DY!’ I lengthened the last syllable into a several seconds long stretch of panic, my throat stinging in protest.
The fireman and paramedic exchanged glances of pity, and then, unexpectedly, the woman sat me down inside the ambulance and took a seat beside me.
I wailed louder, not agreeing with their sudden decision of sitting me in the ambulance, and pounded my good hand into the side of the seat as the fireman shut the double doors, casting an apologetic look in my direction.
I breathed in deep, and once more, screamed at the top of my lungs.
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