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The Dream Snatcher



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Wed Apr 27, 2011 4:15 am
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Alexwriter says...



This was very well written and other than grammatical errors (which have already been pointed out) I couldn't find much fault with it. I would have liked a bit more description but that's something I need to work on, too. This story really captured a child's innocence and the power of imagination. I loved the last line it was absolutely brilliant and you definitely have talent and a wonderful writing voice.
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