This isn't super polished because I wrote it as the idea came to me, so let me know what you think. Thanks.
Chapter 1
The man at the bar sat in silence, his fedora pulled down low and a beer untouched in front of him. He wore a black suit and had a vintage leather watch on. He caressed the cold glass bottle and stared off into the distance. I sat a little to his left and decided that I would flirt with him. His mysterious attitude drew me in. Touching his arm I felt him tense and then relax. He turned only a bit and I could see a smile forming on his lips. "what do you want?" his voice was like a deep tunnel into nothingness. "I was just wonder---" I was cut short when the sounds of angry men entering the bar came closer and grew louder.
"Hey Pal, Didn't I tell you never to show your face in these parts again?" One chubby, sweaty man in business attire yelled at the mysterious man next to me.
"If that were the case I don’t think you made it very clear." the mysterious man growled. I sat helpless and wondered what to call him besides the mysterious man. I wanted his name (and maybe his number) but what were the chances a 23 year old waitress like me could pick up this guy.
The chubby man clapped his hand twice and the group of 5 men took out guns and suddenly I saw that the bar was empty. Everyone had abandoned ship except dumb me!!!!!! I could feel my heart racing and tried to keep my cool while spotting the nearest exit for a quick escape. The leader in the business suit left the bar and we were surrounded by his men.
"No need to get violent." He said in a calm voice that hinted something dangerous. He stood and took out a cigarette and lit it. He took a deep puff and let out the smoke. It formed a ring above his head like a halo and I thought it would make a good picture to capture the drama of the moment. Too bad I didn't have a camera with me.
"Don't talk! Get rid of the girl one of ya." A guy from the group spoke with a heavy New Jersey accent. I stood up and hid behind the mysterious man and quickly I heard him whisper "Hold tightly to my coat.". I clinched the back of his coat and he quickly pulled out two pistols. He grabbed me by the waist and I let go of his coat. We dived behind the bar table as they opened fire. He then cocked both pistols and fired three shots above the counter. One man screamed; he had been hit. He went back around the side of the bar table and crouched low. I peaked over and saw him aim for the leg of another man. "BAM." another one down crying in pain. He only had one left but he fled.
I had just witnessed a crime happen and I was a part of it. I was a witness……
The mysterious man started to head for the door, still calmly smoking his cigarette and turned to me.
"Don't follow or you die." he opened the door and walked briskly out and onto the street. Pfft, who did he think he was?! I could take him any day any how even if it was just in my dreams. Truth is, I wasn't afraid of him, but attracted to him like bees to honey. I wasn't going to let him get away so I ran out to find the streets empty. Then I heard the sound of a sports cars engine rev behind the building in the alley. It came out into the street and it was a sleek Audi. I knew he wouldn't stop for me so I did the dumbest thing any person could ever do in the city. With as much courage as I could muster I ran out in front of his car and closed my eyes bracing for the hit. He slammed on the breaks and I pretended to faint. He stepped out of his car and stood over me.
"Get up, you aren't fooling me. What the hell are you trying to do?!" he sounded angry, but I ignored his tone.
"The least you can do is take me home after all this." I said shyly.
Sighing he pondered the thought and right then a van sped around the corner and more shots broke out.
"Get in the car!" He ran back and hopped into the drivers seat and I jumped into the passenger side. Before I even had a chance to put on my seatbelt he stomped on the gas and we lurched forward.
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