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In the last sentence, some of the words were unnecessary and made the sentence a bit awkward in my opinion.Now that most of the students had left, the hostels and cafeteria were the areas best heated. The school as freezing now, I knew. I’d visited the Arts Block with Sakura to fetch a few pots of paint for a project the day before, and we had to wear our warmest clothing to be able to stand the temperature. Luckily,enoughnothing had happened to the paint, since they were all kept in temperature-proof cupboards, but a bottle of water somebody’d left behind on the last day of school had frozenthrough.
I sipped my chocolate and watched the snowflakes fall outside.
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