This is a short story a have written based in a ww1 inside a small Sopwith pup biplane. Any feedback would be appreciated. enjoy!
Falling in Flames
Short story by
Lewis Beach
As our four Sopwith squadron flew over the French countryside we noticed the large grey balloons rising slowly from behind the forest. I searched the sky for my Squadron Commander’s aircraft. I noticed the bright red straps flaying from the struts of a Sopwith Pup. I remembered the habit of the Squadron Commanders to attach two small straps on the struts of there aircraft, this little novelty was practical but deadly.
We all awaited the Squadron commanders instructions, constantly we looked back and forth waiting for him to signal the attack. I lined up the first observation balloon in my sights, and in turn they lined us in theirs. Flack explosions began to burst around us, shoving our little aeroplanes around the sky. The commander pointed towards the sun and then opened his throttle and pulled the little pup high into the clouds, we all followed.
After we rose to an altitude that the flack couldn’t reach we levelled off and regrouped. The weather took the side of old Blighty that day as the conditions were perfect for our assault. We had low level could so we cloud hide from the flack. We looked towards our commander for instruction on how to proceed. I noticed he was looking up to the sun, I knew what he was planning and sure enough he singled fort us to use the classic “out of the sun” attack. We all rose towards the sun and the angled our planes towards the balloons and dived towards them. The emerged from beneath the clouds and opened fire at the balloons.
I lined my sight on the first balloon and began to shoot my incendiary bullets towards its vulnerable skin. My bullets tore white hot holes into the skin that then ignited causing a fantastic explosion. The observer began to struggle out of his tiny basket but it was too late, the balloon was on top of him with in seconded and slammed down to earth with a crushing weight. The joy and satisfaction of taking down a threat filled my heart with glee but it soon faded, suddenly the remorse and guilt set in. These emotions always inflamed inside me filling every area until they blocked out my surroundings.
What had I done I’ve taken another humans life, and in such a brutal way. Some who by a twist of feat could have easily had been my brother, the father of children, the husband to a wife, the son of a mother. Time seemed to stop every time I felt this horrible, gruesome guilt.
Suddenly, BANG! A huge tear on the side of my plane ripped its way right down to the tail. The wooden structure that held the flimsy aircraft together was visible and now open to the elements. I had not seen how it had happened but I knew I needed to bring her down. He pushed the control stick forward and with a huge pull and whoosh of cold air the plane fell towards the ground. Surprisingly apart from the outer damage, no defects had occurred within the aircrafts operations and I had full control of her all the way.
I spotted the perfect felid to land in, but surrounding it were thick trees, I knew it would not be easy to miss them with my loss of flue but luckily due to the nature of the damage a still had control, I gently clipped the highest wings of the trees and slowly and carefully I brought the Pup to the ground, as my wheels hit the rough terrain I was thrown back and forth in my claustrophobic cockpit, but I was determined to land safely.
At full pelt I was hurtling towards the end of the filed, I could do nothing so I just held on tight and hoped for the best. The trees drew closer and closer but I began to slow down, each bump became softer and each bounce became lower. Slowly a came to stop, with just six meters to spear before I hit the trees, I knew I was safe, for the moment.
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