Disclaimer: It took me ages to work up the courage to post something, but anyways here it is. Please review, even if you don't finish it. because then I will know that it is boring. THIS IS AN UNCOMPLETE WORK. I'm just posting it so you can tell me if I should keep going or start something else. I'm afraid that I made Leeroy too nice. Hopefully it's going to turn out all romantically in the end between Cedany and Leeroys son, but I wonder if I need something else other than romance happening. (Oh no, now I don't know if I should put this in romance or history. I think I'll do history because there is no actual romance yet so I don't want to dissapoint ppl looking for a good romance story) Also sorry about any spelling mistakes, I haven't proof read.
Anyway, enough about me, read and review please,
Love, Gretchen xx
Captain Leeroy of Beston hid his discomfort. The Baron of Middley had just sent word that his daughter Cedany would be joining the Captians family for the next year so as to better his chances of finding a suitable husband for her.
"Not someone too handsome" he had told her "He shall be an honest hard working man."
"But da!" Cedany whimpered "I don't want to marry and I don't want to stay with the Captain, he has boys and they're disgusting!"
"Now listen," The Baron said in a soft voice, for after all he loved his daughter and only wanted the best for her, "The captain is a brilliant man and you will learn such wonderful things when you live with him, I'm sure his boys will be on their very best behaviour and no doubt you shall teach them a thing or two. As for getting married, I'm sure that we will find a man who is suitable and who will love you."
His words had done little to comfort the fourteen year old girl, who pushed back a wet tendril of soft brown hair from her eyes as she stared out the window at the vast black sky, long after even the servants had gone to quaters.
Her face was silently contorted as tear after tear ran down her cool cheeks, feeling vast black emptiness. In her hand she clutched the only thing that she had of her mother, who had died during labour. A long copper pen.
"your mother would write the most beautiful stories with it." The Baron had said, "Of distant lands and wonderful creatures." They had been in love. It was a beautiful story in itself, a fairytale Lady of Beston had created with her own life. Her greatest story, The Baron often said as he looked at his daughter and saw nothing but the Lady of Beston in her eyes.
The stars shone through her tears and one sped through the sky. Cedany closed her eyes and wished the same thing she had been wishing her whole life.
*
"Are you absoulutely sure sir?" The Captain was sitting opposite Cedany's father. He was a middle aged man, with one deep scar running from his left eye to his jaw line. He held a hat in his hands and portrayed a sort of grimace. Cedany crossed her fingers behind her back as she peered through the door jam.
"Yes Leeroy," The Baron sounded bemused "Do you know how many more suitors we'll get once she's known to have a connection with Captain Leeroy? The Captain Leeroy?"
"Yes, yes but I'm not sure she should be away from you this long. Honestly Baron, she's but a wee child!"
"Leeroy, we have fought together for many years, I have lead you and then when I retired I gave you position of Captain. I ask you this one favour."
The Captian had nothing left. "very well." He said.
"It's for the best." The Baron whispered, but the Captain never knew if this was meant for him or if the Baron was convincing himself.
Cedany felt tears sting at her eyes again. The two men walked out of the room but she didn't care that she had been caught evesdropping. Captain Leeroy softened at the poor child. After years hard training in the kings service his heart still softened, he thought, the corners of his eyes crinkeling sympethetically at the child, who didn't see, as her head was in her hands and her body convolsing softly with her sobs.
"Pack your things child," The Baron said, "you leave after we supp, I shall send Kima up to help you pack."
His face was set hard, Leeroy thought. Cedany was startled when she saw this, she had never seen her father look so stern.
"Pa.." She croaked.
"Go!" He ordered and she fled off amongst a wirl of cries.
The poor fool, Leeroy though, he actually thinks he's doing her good.
"Miss Cedany?" Kima's soothing, feminine voice floated into Cedany's quaters. The girl was laying face down on the bed. "Oh Miss Cedany!" Kima said, cradeling the girl in her arms. "No, don't cry! Everything will be fine. We'll all be fine here, you'll be fine. We'll all be ok."
"Kima I don't want to go!"
"Oh sweet child! I wish I could help."
Kima was the closest thing Cedeny had to a mother, although the maid was only a few years older than Cedany herself.
***
The trip to The Captain's home was a quiet one. Cedany rode her fat little pony a few meters behind Leeroy's sturdy mare so he wouldn't hear her sobs as she remembered the tense good-bye back at Middley.
They stopped to lunch half-way along the trip. Leeroy kept his distancce from the girl, as he did not want to upset her further.
She will come around in due time, he thought, and he was right.
"What's his name?" The timid whisper came from Cedany. She had stopped crying, but her eyes were red and swollen. It took Leeroy a moment to think what she was talking about, but then he realised she was talking about his horse.
"Stormbringer." He said, "And she's a mare. I prefer mares," He explained "They're not as flighty as stallions."
"Mine's a gelding." Cedany replied, "All the Middley horses are. How come you don't have geldings?-Captain" She added cautiosley.
"Just call me Leeroy," He said, smiling, "Captian is for when I'm in the command. As for geldings, I just, never have, or never will, be able to abide to how they become so."
Cedany thought about this. "I suppose so." She said. "I've never thought about that. From now on I shall take mares aswell." She patted her pony, Sorrowsweet and they took to the road once more, in a much more companionable silence.
***
It was mid-afternoon by the time they reached the Captains home. It was very different to Cedany's home in Middley. Back home they had hardly any windows and no balcony's at all. Here, both were in abundance.
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