This was originally a story for my English teacher. I wanted to post it because I liked it. This was an assignment after we read the short story called "A Story of an Hour. If you want to read that you can find it here:http://www.vcu.edu/engweb/webtexts/hour/
A slow, quiet knock on the thin, wooden door is never a good sign. When the tentative sound comes from the close friend of your husband's who normally would walk in the large smiles and loud laughter everything gets much, much worse.
Victoria Jackson had a toddler clinging to her skirts, and a baby on the way. She opened the door to the journalist and immediately stopped her chores "Hello, David..." She studied her guest's face minutely for any sign of the reason for her unexpected visit.
"Sit, Victoria."
Being told to sit in her own house made her nervous, for it is also a bad sign.
She obeyed and picked up the little girl with her father's blue eyes and dimples.
"Victoria... I got a telegraph," he sighed and ran a large hand through his thick brown hair. He looked up at the ceiling and closed his eyes. "Adam is dead."
She frowned as if she didn't comprehend and set her daughter down. "What?"
David began pacing and replied softly, "There was an accident on the railways. He didn't make it." He waited for tears and denial. He waited for hysterical sobbing... but nothing came. He watched her blank face go from confusion to surprise and felt a nervousness flutter in his stomach. Was Adam nothing to her?
Victoria sat in eerie silence and studied her calloused hands. Hands that had once been delicate and smooth.
Hands that were ruined with the work of a household.
For a moment she was filled with surprise, and she was hit with brief sorrow.
She had been young when she had first met him. Young and stupid. So stupid.
He was charming and handsome. He could talk, and she would melt. Soon they were meeting each other when her parents were asleep and he was off of work at the factory.
She got pregnant, and he got mad. Never had she in her seventeen young years seen such cold anger. As if he didn't know what came of his actions.
They got married. He got mean. He got drunk. He got lazy, and she worked and worked and worked.
Never again, never again would she have to clean a shirt that smelled of perfume she could not afford. Not another minute of her day would be wasted ironing a shirt that would wind up wrinkled. How she hated that smell, that too sweet smell of another woman!
Joy filled her. No, not joy. Joy was saved for the birth of a child, the winning of a war. This was... freedom. She was free of the hateful words and the heavy fist. Free. Free. Free.
A kick from the being within her brought her back to reality, the seriousness of this tragedy.
"How will we survive?" she whispered. Without a man's salary she couldn't feed herself not to mention two growing children. She had no money saved up. She had no living relatives.
She listened to her daughter sing childish nonsense and felt a wave of despair wash over her. "I can't work and watch Abby and take care of a baby."
David stopped his pacing and sat in the chair across from her suddenly. If only she had known years ago, if only Adam hadn't been so skilled at the art of wooing a woman. He could have swooped in and taken this woman for himself. He was friendly with the lowly factory worker for Victoria, to be close, to be ready when she was. Now was his chance to take the only woman he had ever loved for himself. "We both know Adam wasn't faithful... I was thinking... if you see fit, of course, maybe... you would join me in marriage."
Victoria blinked but took it in the stoic way she received all information since her marriage. She felt that freedom die as soon as it heard the word. [i]Marriage.[i] What else could it mean than slavery?
To give her life yet again to a man seemed unfair. To pledge yet again to wash perfume from a man's shirts and iron them only to find them in the same sickly sweet smelling pile seemed to be a jail sentence.
No rested on her lips.
Abby sang softly in another room with the beautiful ignorance of a young child, and the unborn babe without the stains of the world moved inside of Victoria.
No disappeared as her two beloved children came to the foreground of her mind. "Will you love my babies?" she asked.
So I might do a follow up story on David and Victoria if I get the right reviews now that I've edited it.
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