Young Writers Society

Ahahahaha, I usually don't go for parodies, but this was hilarious. It was absolutely fantastic, usually subtlety is more effective, but I think this style works for a Breaking Dawn parody. Very nice

You're the first thirteen year old, besides myself (last year) I've ever, er, seen, for lack of a better word, that isn't in love with Twilight, which is kind of sad

haha. it may not have been well written--but it was hilarious! and im a hardcore twilight fan! that was actually really funny

Wow that was amazing ((grins)) I love twilight but that was so funny.

I am not trying to be rude at all. But the way that you portray the characters is not right. It doesn't have that much detail to go with it. I cannot like the story for discreninating agianst the Twilight serise so much, since i love the serise. Other than that it was quiet funny and you are a great writer. Keep up the work!

-Danielle

Hahahaha!
Wow that was funny.
As you probably can see I'm a big twilight fan *points to picture*
I mean if this was the real twilight it wouldn't sell
But I thought it was great

Thank you so much! I absolutley hate Twilight. The author cant go a whole page without gushing about Edward PUKE! She only really created a sick fantasy world for disturbed fangirls!
These were the most boring,overrated, terrible pieces of literature of all time. The author is pretty much ripping off every other vampire romance novel, and she honestly is only writing these books because she A. has a sick psychotic crush on edward cullen or B she thinks she has talent. SHE CANT EVEN Write a real story! TWILIGHT SUCKS!

Lmao this is funny but you forgot to mention the sex that takes place throughout the whole damn book. But i think this was hilarious!! Do you have any other parodies of the Twilight books? If so please message me so i can look them up! Keep writing!!

Hi! I started reading Twilight about 3 weeks ago (finished all the books within a week) and I love it. I'm not an obsessed fan like my friends (they have shirts, posters, jewelry, the whole lot!) but I did enjoy it. Though I have to say that Edward was a little sappy. Like when he was gushing about how much he missed Bella, using metaphors of stars and comets (excuse me... comet) but I thought it was nice. I hated all the attention it got when it first came out, because I was sure that other books deserved it more. But after I read it, I have to say that it was really sweet.
I agree on the fact that New Moon wasn't the best book ever. It was by far my least favorite. But there is no way that I would refer to the Twilight saga as "the most boring,overrated, terrible pieces of literature of all time."
I thought your story was extremely offensive toward Stephenie Meyer.(I don't see you having any published stories!) I did smile when I read the scene where Jacob is asking Bella to make out with him. Funny and so true! (I'm not a Jacob fan. At all.) But, I just can't really bring myself to like this. Sorry.

-Ali

Cool, I love it!

Hilarious *claps* absolutely genius
I love you so much for this It was amazing. Hahahah
I can't even comment 'cuz my stomach is sore from laughing *lols*
crap review, much?
Anyway, a gold star is in order. Most definitely.




~Kirsten
xxx

i was laughing....SO HARD.

my favorite line is this one:

"CHARLIE: [chuckles] You’ll be fine. Keep walking."

just..the Keep Walking part just made me laugh for liek four minutes straight!! i applaude you, adieu adieu.

danielle_that_girl15 wrote:I am not trying to be rude at all. But the way that you portray the characters is not right. It doesn't have that much detail to go with it. I cannot like the story for discreninating agianst the Twilight serise so much, since i love the serise.
-Danielle

It's exactly right! All she did was take shallow characters and exaggerate their personalities. That's normally what you do in a parody. You should also use spell check. ^_^
To all Twilight obsess-ees who read this: Chill out. She never said she hated Twilight. It's just a parody.

Anyway...

On with the review!

This was really, really funny. There aren't really any nit-picks.

If you write another one, Bella should be blinded by Edward since he sparkles so much.

Good luck with the contest!

A Not-so-fan of Twilight,
~~~Sakura~~~

It's refreshing to read this because I was starting to think I was crazy for hating the books. This was funny and yet so true.

Thanks for reviewing/commenting to everyone who liked it/didn't like it! And thanks for the gold stars! I love writing these, they're such a great way to waste time. I have written a New Moon Parody (I know I'm doing this out of order) and it is in the script section. I'm not done with it and it's not as good as this one yet, but it will be soon!

It's exactly right! All she did was take shallow characters and exaggerate their personalities. That's normally what you do in a parody. You should also use spell check. ^_^
To all Twilight obsess-ees who read this: Chill out. She never said she hated Twilight. It's just a parody.

Yay! Somebody finally gets this! Thank you so much Sakura! Right, if I haven't stressed this enough, I'm not trying to offend Stephenie Meyer or her series and I don't hate Twilight (all that much.) This was written purely for entertainment purposes. Please don't feel that I am insulting you if you are a Twilight fan, because I am not.

Anyway, thanks again everyone! More parodies are coming!

-Winter

XD XD AIR PLEASE...!

My Favorite Parts:

EDWARD: It's ok Bella. It's ok. Stephenie Meyer won't hurt you.

and

STEPHENIE MEYER: [suddenly appears next to EDWARD and BELLA] I think I need to add a few more words to this script to make it good. Let’s see… umm… well God-like, of course. What else… dazzle. And… umm... topaz. And beautiful. Masochistic, for sure. And cold and icy. And God-like. And icy. DAZZLE! There, perfect. You may continue with your script now.

Great Parody, can't wait for more