I just wrote my best Morganville fan ficiton... well.. i think it's good. please take your time in reading it... point out any mistakes and most commonly, mine is in grammar and discription. Thanks!
WARNING: IF YOU HAVE NOT READ THE FIFTH MORGANVILL DON'T READ THIS!
Morganville vampires fan fiction-
Claire Danvers glared at Myrnin for a long, painful moment. He stared up at her, covered in blood as she realised what had just had happened. He was currently going crazy, his mind wasn’t right, a disease passed through all the vampires in Morganville Texas, all because of Bishop; a plain evil villain who hated his own vampire daughter, Amelie, who was at one time the most powerful vampire. Vampires ruled Morganville, and to confront a vampire in any way was dangerous, and would cause you to be all over the front page of a newspaper reported dead.
Claire didn’t really understand how quickly things had gone by, she’d just stuck a stake in Myrnin for the second time in her life. He was a back stabbing mental vampire with serious issues. Yes, he could be sweet, but he really needed to take his crystals.
The crystals were a type of antibiotic against the disease; except they didn’t actually cure it, they just calmed it.
But that look Myrnin had given her… pure hunger, pure thirst for her blood. She couldn’t let herself be bitten. He’d lunged himself at her, and she’d gripped the stake in her pocket and automatically stabbed him in the chest. If he ever recovered, he wouldn’t take too kindly to seeing Claire again.
Ever.
But seeing him sprawled on the floor in the city hall, dying in his own blood in front of a dozen vampires, made her want to scream like a child and run away. Michael Glass (one of her best friends going out with her gothic friend Eve), Amelie, Oliver (Freakishly bossy and intimidating) and others she didn’t recognise were there. They were all staring at her.
Claire felt so small.
‘I… I don’t…’ Claire whimpered, but before she could get another word out, Amelie had grabbed her by the throat, pinning her to the ground and she slapped her hard against the cheek, hard enough to cause blood to appear.
‘You stupid bitch!’ Amelie cried.
‘I’m sorry! It…. He just… I didn’t…’ Claire knew she wasn’t going to be able to get another word out. She just knew the vampires were going to kill her. She felt terrified, lonely and betrayed.
‘We needed him and you killed him!’ Amelie screeched still gripping Claire’s throat, but not tight enough to choke her, just a warning.
‘He’s not dead!’ Claire cried, tears spilling from her cheeks. ‘You said that stakes don’t kill vampires! That they just paralyse them!’
Fury flashed through Amelies eyes as they flashed red, baring her fangs as she hissed. ‘This is the second time you’ve done this Claire! That blood on your hands! I won’t have it! I let you off last time, but no… this time Claire. This time you won’t see Shane again. This time you won’t see Michael, Eve or even your parents!’
Claire was terrified. Of all people she had to mention Shane, Claire’s boyfriend. The man she loved.
‘Please no,’ Claire tried to escape Amelies terrifying grip, but didn’t succeed. Why would she succeed? This was a vampire pinning her to the ground! ‘Don’t kill me.’
Amelie actually stopped still over Claire for a moment.
‘Kill you?’ Asked Amelie, sounding almost sarcastic. ‘Why would I kill you?’
Claire knew Michael was looking at her, but she couldn’t turn her head to face him. Not with Amelie pinning her down like this. The vampires were just doing nothing.
‘I won’t kill you Claire,’ Amelie said. ‘No… I’m going to make your life a living hell… It might kill me but who cares if I die? Would you Claire?’
Claire closed her eyes and tried to say yes, but no sound came out. ‘Please don’t…’
‘What? Make you a vampire? I’ll do what the hell I want!’ Amelie shrieked.
‘No!’ Michael screamed, startling Claire. ‘Please! No… not Claire!’
‘Michael, stay out of this,’ Amelie said, more of a command than anything else.
‘No! You won’t hurt her. She won’t become one of us, if you do that she’ll be driven to insanity, she’ll get the disease and then who will make the cure for us?’
Amelie let go of Claire’s neck and frowned. ‘What just happened? Claire…’
The disease was affecting Amelie, it was affecting her bad and Claire could do nothing. She just had to watch all the vampires go insane… there was a cure that she knew of. Bishops blood, but to get his blood would be very hard. Especially since he was in charge of Claire, controlling her like a puppet with the ink tattoo on her arm… Claire knew that to get his blood, it would have to be by some serious method.
‘Ada,’ Claire whispered. ‘Michael, we need Ada.’
Amelie frowned. ‘Ada, why do we need –’
Amelie didn’t have time to finish her sentence, because Frank Collins slammed the door open, holding dozens of stakes in his hand. Frank was a big man, in biker clothes and messy filthy hair, messy and scraggly. His face was covered in mud and his eyes had an insane edge to them. He stared around the room till his gaze locked on Michaels face and he smiled wickedly.
‘I’ve been waiting so long for this moment,’ Frank said, and he threw the stake.
i know it's pretty long but hope you enjoyed it and please comment.
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