That was great! It was in total accord with Draco's character, he talks tough but has a weak heart.
I aslo like your interpritaion of Severus Snape's charcter. Where he truly feels sympathy for Draco, albiet awkwardly.
This idea is very creative, I never seen a story about Draco before school.
All in all, I think that this story is extremely creative and interesting.
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