Life is a war,
A dangerous one.
Life is the core,
To everyone.
Open your eyes,
Look up to the skies,
And see what lies before you.
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. That's all I have to say! Keep writing!Life is the core, to everyone.
Great start, but I was hoping you would connect the next lines to these ideas. That would have been better.Life is a war,
A dangerous one.
Life is the core,
To everyone.
Open your eyes,
Look up to the skies,
And see what lies before you.
Open your eyes,
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