This is a poem I wrote for (and about) my girlfriend. It's just about the first poem I've ever written - which is shocking for a student of English I know.
Any comments are welcome (especially nice ones!)
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A momentary imagined return to her arms is enough, and
The (not even) half memory becomes sufficient and yes,
Yes I am back in her arms, fully now as the half-read
Sentence in the half-read page of the book I really should read
Slips to the floor. Abandoned for now at least. Abandoned.
Marching armies of letters in the trick of the light
Look. Look up accusing. Can they not conjure images as vivid?
The goddesses of Greek Mythology with radiant beauty to
Outshine any mortal lie discarded, unwanted, unable to progress in
Godly matters as their reader's mind recalls a greater beauty still.
Barren leaves of books on which even magnificent metaphors
Fall short of my memory of her.
Her bright eyes unforgettable, jewels on that sad, frosty night and then
Black hair in the harsh, hot sun - more vivid imagery, but for my love
Now. Tender lips, untouchable. Soft, firm hips make my fingertips tingle in
Anticipation. Wanting to turn the page of my memory but racing to the
Final, unwritten page. The crazy colour scheme of my imagined artwork;
Red runs down the memory, filling the blank, white – innocent –
Canvas. Two shades of coffee, first creamy liquid, then darker granules;
A climactic shock of pink, a flower opening softly as December sun sets
On the convincing memory which is yet to happen.
Imagined beauty, for a moment wildly hopeful and lovely
Yet equally temporal as a tiny flame dying
In the enclosure of a small flower. And now I am left with a desire
To live my memory and a beautiful smile. And my grey book.
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