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my sushi blueboy



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Fri Aug 26, 2005 3:05 am
Galatea says...



Love it!
Sing lustily and with a good courage. Beware of singing as if you were half dead, or half asleep; but lift up your voice with strength.
  





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Tue Sep 20, 2005 1:08 am
A.O. Avalon says...



I find myself wanting to meet Sean C. He seems like quite the character.

I enjoy the fusion of words, though over using it can become a bit annoying.
I liked the comparison of your friend to his sushi-- I'm taken with the idea of someone being raw, and at the hint of playfulness in the line
and it slips past your lips.


And if you're proud of a piece, you don't have to justify it to anyone, not even our little lord Brad.
"El sueƱo de la razon produce monstrisos"
--Fransisco de Goya
  








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