Young Writers Society

Some believe that the ferocity of singularity is more painful than the monotomy of similarity and that the prosperity of individuality isn’t as nice as the familiarity of regularity. But I think otherwise.

what do u mean

I have to say that I didn't get anything this poem was trying to say. I understand poems could be written in anyway the writer wants it to be, but if your going to write a two line poem, it has to make the reader interested and carry ideas on what your trying to tell us readers. With this two line poem, your just leaving us more questions than answers. Also from what I'm reading, this isn't even a "Lyric Poem".

Maybe you should keep this in mind with no hard feelings.

N offense but I didn't get it.I can't believe I am saying this because I have best vocabulary in my class! So you have very ice vocabulary or you did something wrong

I love how you use language to convey your message. The language and structure is a tad confusing at times, and I did struggle on my first read, but when I read it again I realised the true message in the poem. I loved that last sentence, that juxtaposed the complexity and confusion of the first so tenderly and decisively: "But I think otherwise.". Maybe have another look at the poem and simplify it, as the insightful comment:

panda21 wrote:what do u mean

suggests that it was a bit mixed and lost. But overall, keep at it. I feel that the main message of the poem is truly one worth sticking to, just edit the poem and make it more clear. All the best