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Shut Me Up Before I Say Something Very Debauched



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Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:25 pm
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MasterGrieves says...



Spoiler! :
This poem is for Mikko


Shut me up,
before I say something
very debauched indeed.
If I ask you, "want to hear
what I did to an idol of mine?"
Tell me no no no;
"I want clean ears".

But that's the fun of me:
very opinionated, descriptive
of how to do things. That's
my nature- if very abrasive.

So please tell me
to shut my trap if I
go too far. You know I'd
do anything to zip up my
potty mouth; even if it means
thinking up a scenario (remember
the time at the pool? ;])

But that's who I am:
bigmouth strikes once more.
That is my nature- if very,
very disturbed at times.

If the need ever arises,
shut me up before I say
something VERY debauched.
But, knowing me, the more I
say it the more outlandish
I get.
The Nation of Ulysses Must Prevail!

If you don't like Mikko, you better friggin' die.

The power of Robert Smith compels you!

Adam + Lisa ♥


When you greet a stranger look at his shoes.
Keep your money in your shoes.


I was 567ajt
  





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Sun Jan 01, 2012 8:37 pm
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Mikko says...



First a blog post and now this. I'm honoured, really I am.

Adam, you're amazing and I don't think I will ever want to shut you up; you entertain me when I need to get away from the world I live in, when my internet is messed up or when I'm too busy to even do anything xD

But that's the fun of me:
very opinionated, descriptive
of how to do things. That's
my nature- if very abrasive.


Mikko approves of this stanza. Yes, that's the fun of you, yes that's your nature. I don't want you to change because I love you the way you are.

Don't change because I need yu to be disturbing. If you change that'll be boring. I don't want you to be boring, I want you to be you: that awesome boy I talk to who makes me laugh so hard and gives me good music to listen to <3

The zip up bit, we've discussed already. ;D


Aaaaaand, 'twas a lovely poem. I loved it and not only because it's for me xD
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
  








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