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Sat Jan 21, 2012 5:14 pm
NoraOHara says...



What is 13?

a number
a curse
a girl

A female
a person
an aqiantance

a friend
a best friend
a love

not lonely like 1
not lucky like 7
but a little odd like 5

shes curious
but vial
shes optimistic
but tempting
shes beautiful

shes my 13
my unlikely favorite
  





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tgirly says...



You spelled aquaintance wrong, and I'm not completely sure I spelled it right, so you'll have to check that. I like the first part, but I'm not sure you pull it all together at the end. Good job though, I always liked short-lined poems and you have a nice rhythm.Hope this helps!
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
-Abraham Joshua Heschel
  








Here's to the crazy ones. The misfits. The rebels. The troublemakers. The round pegs in the square holes. The ones who see things differently. They're not fond of rules. And they have no respect for the status quo. You can quote them, disagree with them, glorify or vilify them. About the only thing you can't do is ignore them. Because they change things. They push the human race forward. And while some may see them as the crazy ones, we see genius. Because the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world, are the ones who do.
— -Apple Inc.