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Young Writers Society


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The World Around Us

by KaavyaK


The world around us is ever changing,

from ‘good to better’ and ‘bad to worse’, it is ever changing.

We are bestowed with the gifts for survival by mother nature,

something we have exploited, but yet to ‘treasure’.

What we exhale they inhale – such a cohesive bond, such a pleasure.

Humans have excelled in technologies,

we can fly and communicate,

we call it ‘power’ and celebrate.

Little have we realized that the hand of creator is laid everywhere, 

being a human is only fair.

The one inside us wants to go beyond ‘boundaries’; ‘cast’, ‘color’ and ‘fake’ identities,

thou one is the true nature of our existence.

The world around us calls for responsibility,

and cries for human attention.

The world around us is a true reflection of the very ‘joy’, 

and the ‘wonder’ of the 'world inside' us.

The world around us is the creator’s MAGIC; entitled to us,

for we humans are its MAGICIAN.


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Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your poem. This reminds me of my bathroom thoughts while the shower runs cold and noisy, tapping on the bathroom floor. It is good that people love to question and share their ideas and perspectives of the world involving around them. That is what makes the human brain beautiful. When they start to notice what is around them and they start to make their own beliefs, experiences, and thoughts about it. Overall, this poem was wonderful. Thanks for sharing this!

- AkuRashomon




KaavyaK says...


Thank you!




"Think of all the beauty still left around you, and smile."
— Anne Frank