Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your poem. This reminds me of my bathroom thoughts while the shower runs cold and noisy, tapping on the bathroom floor. It is good that people love to question and share their ideas and perspectives of the world involving around them. That is what makes the human brain beautiful. When they start to notice what is around them and they start to make their own beliefs, experiences, and thoughts about it. Overall, this poem was wonderful. Thanks for sharing this!
- AkuRashomon
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