I loveeee this! I hope you don't mind me leaving a quick review!
I absolutely see deep admiration in this writing. Your descriptive words elicit feelings of purity, youth, and authenticity. For example:
"The inside of your mind must be like starlight,
For hope undaunted lives within you"
I love this part and the comparison of one's mind to the beauty and clarity of starlight.
Keep it up!!
Points: 13
Reviews: 5
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