Young Writers Society

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is another beautiful tale. I think you've ...

Thank you for sharing this amazing work. I feel that the line "I wonder, when I die, would you even cry?" is something that I really relate to. I often ...

Hello! I hope you are well. I'll go right into the review. First things first, I loved how the entire poem is so perfect, and the flow is smooth. I ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's been some time, but I'm excited for this chapter! Anyway, it's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story ...

Love love loveeeee the first part describing the car - i've never thought about it like driving a car but it fits so well. so many great metaphors and analogies ...

gorgeous word library without sounding like you took everything from a thesaurus - i like how the story fluctuates like the narrator is just speaking to someone without making it ...

I hope you don't mind leaving a review! I really love this work. "If my voice could cry out. If the vast nothingness didn't steal the words from my tongue. ...

Hi, I'm here to leave a quick review. Let me preface this by saying that I absolutely love this. It feels authentic and beautiful; a realistic expression of love. The ...

I loveeee this! I hope you don't mind me leaving a quick review! I absolutely see deep admiration in this writing. Your descriptive words elicit feelings of purity, youth, and ...

Hey, here to leave a quick review. I really enjoyed this poem. You use great visual language to evoke images. "The ruby liquid dropped to the white tile." I loved ...

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review. This is such a beautiful work that evokes great feelings of nostalgia for me. I love how you used all lowercase letters; ...

Hello there, human! I’m reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William and Taury find a magical stone that ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite a cute little oneshot, ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a review/ comment for your work. I love this work, it is a great showcase of a ex-friend that used ...