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Hello Again, My Friend! This was a great new installment in your circus collection! The very concept of the marionette has so much rich symbolism, and knowing the pretenses with ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

You write to the diary, we write to ourselves. I like this writing of yours. I don't think there's any need for changes, it's all good. It's nice to look ...

Hello Again, My Friend! Sorry for the late review, lol. It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Her friends find Rose in her limbo state, ...

i swear he can lead he's just a little ummm silly

more of a prayer than anything else~ There's a whole world out there, and my life has been so small. Give me the strength to be greater than what I ...

Nice poem written by the author. The title is quite interesting and unique, because of which I read rest of the poem. "Love is a Monster Love will make you ...

The story was alright. I really liked the way you stressed about snow:). I liked that you tried to give a description, but it needs a little work. And also ...

So, the old-fashioneds were in fact serving them now. Something in the way Alan determinedly guzzled his drink told Lyall that this upcoming conversation was going to be, simply put, ...

Wow, that was something very unexpected from what I imagined. It totally kept you waiting for every next word. I like the way you put a really nice way of ...

#4 Love Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 3 - Song Theme Coin Flip - N/A - N/A Lyric Choice: N/A

Hi! Dragon here for one last review for a while. Love the story so far, and I know it's only getting better from here! That upon which my dragon's eye ...

Good Luck out There Today's Inspiration: Today’s song was wish you well by Wrabel. I rolled Freestyle and Dealer’s Choice, so I focused on letting go of heartbreak and wishing ...

Hi Damian, welcome to YWS - hope you are enjoying the site so far! Here to review your story! Dialect I think the last time I read story with this ...