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Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: I like the title for this, looking forward to seeing what that might mean, from my guesses ...

Hi, ariah!! I am totally late to this but- wait- :o Is this a remake of Reflecting Hearts?!! Woahh, I remember reading the first draft that you posted on here ...

Hi, Toast here! I’d like to first say, Wow! this was such a great read! First, the concept was super interesting! The idea of what lies in the afterlife has ...

I'm still working on my reviewing format but I hope you enjoy! That upon which my dragon's eye fixed I really love the setting you set up and the tinge ...

Hey y'all, I'm rusty at reviews. Take with a grain of salt. The motif of the seasons is well-used, but not unwelcome-- it's easy to connect to, as everyone experiences ...

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

Hey there Ashurada, welcome to YWS!! :D I'm Rose, and I'm here with a review for this fascinating story. :] I. First Things First First and foremost, let’s talk about ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, When low you forget to ...

Wow, this is an amazing poem written by the author. "You are glad to own a doll. One you can customize as you please. After all I am yours aren't ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hi! Very interesting plot presented here. I welcome you to expand! There is so much more we need to know! Like, the fisherman’s backstory. I mean, he is like very ...

Hi! What I liked about this story was it reminded me of R.L. Stone’s Goosebumps series of books. I devoured all of them. And loved them to bits! Now, as ...

Me, energetic, not scared. Emma, kind, vibrant appearance. Cole, energetic, rad appearance. Brody, scared, sensitive. Vile, tired, worn out Ava, mean, annoying. I’m not sure why this part is necessa